Comet Tail -WIP-

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"Ready or not here i come!"

Comet Tail
Circle: Earth

Age: 23
Skills:  He can run fast.
Weaknesses:
Friends: The mane six, Luna,Derpy,Spike
Family: Unknown
Enemies:  The Changling Queen,  Discord (he still freaks him out)


Brief History:
Comet was born and raised in ponyville as a young colt all he dreamed about was becoming a famous track star runner he trained hard everyday and on one such day his cuite mark appeared in the form of a shooting star. Overjoyed Comet contuies his training but now is a little bit of a show off to his friends. When not training, he works at the Ponyville observatory when a letter to the Academy was found in his mail box Comet rushes off eager to enroll in the school not knowing of the dangers that await him.

[Twilight Sparkle]

So... Is his name Comet Tail, or Comet Rush? You have the thread titled Comet Tail but it says Comet Rush in the app. Also, there's a massive run-on sentence in the history in need of breaking up. And Ponyville is a proper noun. It needs to be capitalized. You're also missing commas in places where they really ought to be.

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sorry about that. i'll edit.